Hey thar. I posted a journal entry on my page that I want you to read. It's a possible beginning to The Y Files Sequel. I have a lot more typed than what I posted, with fighting and interesting plot type stuff, but I want to know if the very beginning is too boring and drawn out before I get to that. Or is it too vague and lacking in room and feeling detail? Or is it good as is? I could use some criticism, so when you get a chance give it a read. Meanwhile, I will work on Chapter Six of my crazy teacher story!

Show it to Kate too and let me know what she says.

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Thank you very much for your really nice comment.

I like this shoe, too ^o^

I appreciate the fav! ^_^

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